Democratic rally for Obama's jobs bill

The Domecratic party is hoping to put pressure on the republicans to pass Obama's Jobs Bill by hosting a rally. To me the Jobs Bill is a great idea because the enemployment rate is increasing in some of the essential jobs in america like first responders such as police and firemen, and educators or teachers. This bill is going to provide money to help pay for positions in those essential jobs, which could give some of them their jobs back atleast and bring the unemployment rate back down. The author's intended audience is not only the american people but in specific the people who were laid off these jobs. This commentary is trying to inform and convince the intended audience to support this passing of the Jobs Bill by helping put pressure on the republicans and making them feel sympathetic. The author states that this rally aims to put a human pace on a legislative effort that would spend $30 billion on education-related jobs and $5 billion on first responder's jobs by placing an income tax. This I would have to say alot of people would object to as far as increasing the taxes, but it is necessary to support more jobs in these fields. The author has credebility in this commentary from the original facts of this bills goal as far as what the job bill is going to accomplish and what people are doing to make sure the bill is passed through news. I agree with the author completely in that jobs in those important fields such as education and first responders are worth the little increase in our income taxes.